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Open Poetry #48

natures undercut

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-05-18 04:11 PM

She touched where the sky
met gods breath
her eyes touched the floor
for the decadence of the wall
would lose itself to her white dress

So she touched the undercut of her belly
through the storm
of the easy western snow

With a wish in the sky
she felt the under colors of
the black midnight dress
of the cobblestone floor
where the alcoves
met the corners of the land
and he could see her with her eyes
watching and watching

Blouse to blouse
where the sacred shepherds began to lose
their fall and the snow met the rain
for a quiet conversation
to tame her busy thoughts.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2013-05-19 02:49 PM

kind of illusively erotic and liked a lot

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-05-22 12:56 PM

You've taken rain melting snow to higher dimensions. Enjoyed!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-05-30 05:47 PM

Emma-

Happy it touched you. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-05-30 05:47 PM

Lighthouse-

Thanks for the read and compliment. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

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