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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-05-29 06:47 AM



Fingers of mist rose
Off the bayou around leaves
Thin as fairy wings

©May 28, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-29-2013 07:57 AM).]

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chourouk
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1 posted 2013-05-29 09:46 AM


Dear friend ... Jerrypat2...

I always miss to your wonderful poems.
I enjoied

Thank you

chourouk

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-05-29 09:58 AM


Thank you, chourouk, I appreciate you being here.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2013-05-29 12:18 PM


as thin as fairy wings


lovely image!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-05-29 12:37 PM


Thank you, VAS, I appreciate your presence here.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2013-05-29 03:50 PM


You captured the moment perfectly. Enjoyed!
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-05-29 03:59 PM


Appreciate it Bob.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2013-05-29 09:12 PM



Perfect! I am really impressed with the Haikus you have been doing lately....
Don't stoplori



JerryPat2
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8 posted 2013-05-29 09:15 PM


Okay, I wont stop, Lori. Thank you for stopping by tonight.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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9 posted 2013-05-29 11:27 PM


Impressive Haiku, Jerry.
                          Ida

Margherita
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10 posted 2013-05-30 06:08 AM


Your best haiku ever, dear Jerry. Your eyes have deepened the vision and see the ethereal beauty that remains hidden to most onlookers.


Gorgeous!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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11 posted 2013-05-30 07:02 AM


Appreciate your wonderful thoughts, Margherita, and I thank you.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

EmmaRose
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12 posted 2013-05-30 07:11 PM


sure is perdy, JPat. I could see it here across the miles  
JerryPat2
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13 posted 2013-05-30 07:21 PM


Thank yew, EmmaRose, glad you took a likin' to it . . .

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

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