Longing Over Regal Intimacy

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-05-26 07:02 AM

my thoughts are of you
often each day
nighttime finds you in my dreams
upon the morn I sense you in the wind
I hear your lilting echoing voice
upon my tongue there is the taste of you
causing my aching soul
to spend another day in eternity
I see you like a phantom goddess
deep within my every being
hope is the final straw
like a blind man always looking
and you're always a distance wail from me

©May 12, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ The Energizer bunny arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2013-05-26 10:07 AM

Can feel the ache this far away.
Hope can hurt sometimes, when it lingers too long without fruition, I know

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-05-26 10:18 AM

Yeah, EmmaRose, I guess most people have gone through this kind of torment. It's a sweet kind of torment, but a torment nevertheless. Thank you for your words of compassion.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2013-05-26 02:02 PM

A "Regal Intimacy"... wow,
that said it all. Your poem echoed the title!
Enjoyed, JP,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-05-26 02:22 PM

Thank you intensely, Ms. E. You always give me a glow of satisfaction when you comment.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2013-05-26 03:08 PM

A torment indeed, my friend ... and the last line - perfect!!

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-05-26 04:12 PM

I appreciate you stopping by and reading and commenting, J.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2013-05-26 04:44 PM

quote:
causing my aching soul
to spend another day in eternity

You have expressed your longing very beautifully, Jerry! Feeling so intensely is such a gift!

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-05-26 05:03 PM

I have thought along those line myself, Margherita, that to feel something so intensely is to be more human than most people. However, when you experience it it surely doesn't feel that way to you. Thank you for continuing to support me here at the Blue Room.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

9 posted 2013-05-29 02:10 PM

Whew! What a tug-of-war in the mind you present here between closeness with its intimacy and distance with its loneliness. Enjoyed!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-05-29 02:31 PM

Yep, I hear you about the tug-o-war, Bob. It is that for sure. Thank you.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

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