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Open Poetry #48
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beaniebaby
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since 2005-11-17
Posts 55
0 posted 2013-05-23 10:33 AM

fragmented
pieces of me
are here and where
I can't remember leaving
there

I had thought to detail
so much I had to say
but between the many frayed endings
and the empty spaces
silence has fallen

whose fault it is
mine
yours
who cares
the results are the same
with resolve
I undertake the wreckage
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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2013-05-23 11:38 AM

Very good write, my friend.

j.
beaniebaby
Member
since 2005-11-17
Posts 55
2 posted 2013-05-23 03:03 PM

thanks my friend........sigh....rather overcast today and not feeling 'myself'
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2013-05-24 02:24 PM


Yeah, regardless who's at fault, happy endings are so hard to come by, but you do express such a strong determination for resolve in your poem that I have to believe they certainly are reachable. They just gotta be! Even on an 'overcast' day! They just gotta be! Enjoyed!  
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