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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-05-23 07:09 AM



I will use my tongue
To write a poem on your skin
Breathe words in your mouth

(©)May 18, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

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© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2013-05-23 07:42 AM


That's what I would call a very seductive senryu, dear Jerry.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-05-23 07:52 AM


Heh.Heh Yes, Margherita, thank you, it was meant to be seductive.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2013-05-23 11:46 AM


It worked! Hot stuff there my friend. It isn't a wonder you have a Lady Love. Boy is she a lucky woman!

Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-05-23 11:48 AM


Haha! Thanks Lori, but I figure I'm the lucky one. Appreciate your stopping by and commenting.

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Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2013-05-24 02:35 PM


Well, um, it certainly appears, from this poem that, um, you're very multifaceted, my friend, um, I mean, um, you can do all Kinds of poetry.  Enjoyed!  
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-05-24 02:53 PM


Okay, um, I take that as a, um, compliment, ah um, Bob and thank you for it. Heh.Heh

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