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Open Poetry #48

For the babies

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-05-18 05:55 PM

Once thriving on trellis
detached by winds blown by
the moring glory from her throne,
in abstract pieces blues the fields
that yearn for Sunday sermon

lay down your petrified tears
your bayonets and nightmares
of Perdition

the great Earth's womb
will heal your broken bones
and shelter from the demon's
interception.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (05-20-2013 08:36 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-05-18 05:58 PM

I hear you loud and clear, EmmaRose, but I fear there will be few takers of this peace plan. We humans have the blood of the past in our veins to continue the slaughters. It's a shame, but it is a fact.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-05-20 09:47 PM

Though I saw your fields of blue as being melancholy, no Sunday sermon, I do believe your poem, for the babies, compliments the fields of white. Enjoyed!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2013-05-21 01:17 PM

Wonderfully done, my friend. I agree with both Jerry and Bob ... and you, of course.

j.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2013-05-22 01:37 PM

What a lovely world it would be if we could heal in this way. Much enjoyed your peace filled thoughts in this EmmaRose.

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-05-23 02:37 AM

Nice...James

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