Open Poetry #48 |
Winter Came |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
While on duty the guard slept sound as the evil reaper crept around. So before our very eyes he was able to claim his prize. Like Persephone she was stolen away... and winter came. Ida Werrett For my daughter who passed away May 11th, 2000. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am so very, very sorry, Ida. ~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
God bless you, Ida, your Angel and devoted family. E |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Tears and hugs, Ida. Owl |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This was beautiful, even in its sadness, Ida. A long, cold winter I'm far too familiar with. (Hugs) to you. Michael |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So beautiful, Sending love Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I want to reach out with a long tender hug, dear Ida. On this Mother's day (in Europe it's today) may you know how much you are loved, even from a sideral distance, your daughter's soul connects with yours. May you feel her as she whispers her forever love to you and just whisper back ... Very intense, poignant poem. Much love. Margherita |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I felt the vibrations as I read this of a sting, a mother's pain, and still, there is beauty in all, when the poet's tender heart speaks. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, Ida. Such a sadness portrayed so visually. I am so sorry for your loss. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sorry for your loss and I can only imagine that it's very very difficult, but, still, hoping your springs get a bit longer each year. Enjoyed! |
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