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Will You |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
Will You Will you know when I'm gone before that knock sounds at the door Before the phone rings and someone whispers the news Will your heart feel the void before my body is cold If not, go now Run before my heart beats your name Before each breath I take, I take for you I've had "for now" I want forever. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very deep and resounding poetry, Sue_s. I quite agree with wanting forever instead of the lame "for now" excuse. Nice work . . . ~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is very sensitive, sue, thanks for the deep and delicate questionings, yann |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
One place or another, a woman has no problem getting attention... "Forever?" ...Now, that's a good question and a good vow that even us married couples need to remember. Enjoyed!  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
We sure could ose a bit of forever these days. Great little poem. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...I know these feelings...James |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
Thank you all for taking the time to read and respond. Much appreciated. Sue |
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