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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-05-07 08:45 AM


there are those who around me
surely we're not of the same type
from asylums they musta been freed
spouting nonsensical words through bong pipes
I've given up understanding them
they think of me un-cool
I think they've embalmed their brain stems
totally misrepresenting words of drool
while I am far from being "square"
I've done things that should've made me dead
stopped me from breathing precious air
but through it all I kept my sanity thread
I think, therefore . . .
I hope, and I see tomorrow
I'm in sync with all that I am
I can cope, period

©April 21, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-08-2013 06:35 PM).]

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2013-05-07 11:37 PM


Ha, makes one think what might happen if science continues with 'stem cell' research and one of these gets mixed in with the batch.  Hey, this could be the beginnings for a great Sify adventure!

Anyways, some good coping here!  Enjoyed!  

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-05-08 06:55 AM


Yeah you right, Bob, it could make for sky's the limit story.

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2013-05-08 08:35 AM


Cope...now there is a precious word... Like sight to a blind person.  Enjoyed the write.


lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-05-08 08:52 AM


Good morning, Lori. I agree with you on the cope word. Thank you ever so much for being here.

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2013-05-08 09:10 AM


The ability to cope is the greatest indicator of
living a long life. You've done well my friend
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-05-08 09:32 AM


Grinning and agreeing, Ms. E. In my opinion, understanding yourself is a priority for coping. Sometimes it takes us a long time to understand ourselves. t took me decades, but it is well worth the trip to finally arrive a peace within yourself. Thank you, Ms. E, I always enjoy your input.

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-05-08 10:43 PM


Fine writing...we all need to keep it together...James
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2013-05-09 06:56 AM


Thank we do, James, thank you for your presence.

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

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