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EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-04-27 08:45 PM



I will come home
to you, only you

when the path is uncluttered
at the sunlight's reception
in  a spin of gold shadow
through the twilight's redemption

I will come home
to you, only you

when none will embrace me
receive nor accept me

without stipulation
nor a prophecy's
chasting

I will come home
to you, only you

when the night becomes
lonely, and the moon
fails to hold me.


[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (04-27-2013 09:24 PM).]

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2013-04-28 01:52 AM


I believe that in all my life, this is the most beautiful vow I have ever read or heard.  You have, indeed, a beautiful heart and a beautiful mind.  

I have never read a poem of yours that isn’t beautiful or excellent to the greatest degree that either can be.

I make no apology for the proliferation of the word, “beautiful” in my reply.  Your poem and poetry necessitate it.

Owl

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
2 posted 2013-04-28 08:01 AM


Thank you so much Dear Owl; that is quite
a lovely bouquet of words you honor me with, much appreciated. EmmaRose

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2013-04-30 11:50 AM


I really enjoyed your poem. So inspirational to read of a faithfulness you don't find expressed much anymore. Thank you.  
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2013-04-30 02:00 PM


Ah, must be talking to something much greater than humanity - Beautiful, soul-felt words, my friend...thoroughly enjoyed.

j.

EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2013-04-30 07:19 PM


O indeed, greater than the peanut gallery
of mere mortals

Thank you dear poets for your responses

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2013-05-08 10:22 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
7 posted 2013-05-09 04:04 AM


Your words emanate so much intense emotions that my breath stopped and in the momentaneous void I captured the very pulse of life.

Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2013-05-09 11:27 AM


Enjoyed, EmmaRose.
              Ida

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
9 posted 2013-05-09 11:49 AM


thank you for stopping by and leaving your own poetic wonderful thoughts on my words, always appreciated
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