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I will come home to you
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I will come home to you |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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I will come home to you, only you when the path is uncluttered at the sunlight's reception in a spin of gold shadow through the twilight's redemption I will come home to you, only you when none will embrace me receive nor accept me without stipulation nor a prophecy's chasting I will come home to you, only you when the night becomes lonely, and the moon fails to hold me. [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (04-27-2013 09:24 PM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I believe that in all my life, this is the most beautiful vow I have ever read or heard. You have, indeed, a beautiful heart and a beautiful mind. I have never read a poem of yours that isn’t beautiful or excellent to the greatest degree that either can be. I make no apology for the proliferation of the word, “beautiful” in my reply. Your poem and poetry necessitate it. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Thank you so much Dear Owl; that is quite a lovely bouquet of words you honor me with, much appreciated. EmmaRose |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I really enjoyed your poem. So inspirational to read of a faithfulness you don't find expressed much anymore. Thank you.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, must be talking to something much greater than humanity - Beautiful, soul-felt words, my friend...thoroughly enjoyed. j. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
O indeed, greater than the peanut gallery of mere mortals Thank you dear poets for your responses |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your words emanate so much intense emotions that my breath stopped and in the momentaneous void I captured the very pulse of life. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, EmmaRose. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thank you for stopping by and leaving your own poetic wonderful thoughts on my words, always appreciated |
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