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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
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0 posted 2013-04-30 01:17 AM



Walking along in mild despair,
My lady-friend no longer there,
When then appeared a maiden fair:
With rosy cheeks and raven hair.

My tongue I lost there for a while;
Staring raptly at her radiant smile.
While she found the safe and spun the dial;
Stealing my heart with grace, cunning and guile.

Yet now she’s left me feeling blue,
penniless and broke, it’s true!
She stole my heart as beauties do,
but made off with my wallet, too!


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2013-04-30 05:15 AM


Gotta be careful around those kind of smiles, but I'm aware it is difficult to keep your head amid such sensuous feelings.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2013-04-30 06:40 AM


I enjoyed the twist in this HopelessRomanticGuy. Best to keep that wallet close no matter how beautiful the smile. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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3 posted 2013-05-02 04:19 PM


Yeah, I smell what you're steppin' in here.  Enjoyed!  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2013-05-04 08:37 PM


Enjoyed...James
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