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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2013-04-23 01:03 AM

     Dark crystallized myths
     abound in the human mind.
     Blood's most always shed.

     Darkness may hide the shadows
     But light defines them sharply.

     Kraw'
     042213e / 2349

     ~With a nod to icebox for the idea~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2013-04-23 02:40 AM

Love the last two lines! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2013-04-23 03:42 AM

I love this and the depth of your thoughts, Ed. Whew! This one really went for the solar plexus! I think that your and Charlie’s make an excellent pair of poems. Though my interpretation of what daylight brings in his poem is different to my interpretation of what it brings in yours, I think it makes the two poems being together, all the more wildly fascinating, and all the more delicious, though dark and weighty in content, on which to ponder, and pondering is one of my many pleasures. I can honestly say I have never not been awed by a single of your poems. Thank you for the unwavering richness of your mind, and the art and excellence you display in expressing it.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-04-23 06:44 AM

This crafty and alive with in-depth thinking.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

MusicHealsPain
New Member

since 2013-04-23

Posts 2

4 posted 2013-04-23 01:58 PM

Yes I agree those last two lines are really deep.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2013-04-25 04:28 AM

Never miss one of yours. Krawdad. Always superb.
Ida

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2013-04-29 07:00 PM

Yes, ...the shadows exist regardless. Enjoyed!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2013-04-30 10:30 AM

There is much to ponder here, with the play on the visual as well as the words Krawdad. Light with shadow, artistically intertwined. Very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2013-05-04 08:36 PM

Fine writing...James

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