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of the jaguar trees
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of the jaguar trees |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she is as the doe eye of dawning day tempting leather sides of leaning trees that guard their metal steeds in stoic but follow her whispers with willing as a jaguar of sighs, bending wills and the metal of muscle with desire teaching languages to the moaning men when they are helpless in her dungeon seaward is a song of gypsies at dawn when she is a woman tree, willowing warm for that nectar that would widen her eyes and make her see through the suitors whims that would strum hollow stones to impress her _________ daark |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The landscape of love never looked so good. Thanks for taking me back to share the view. Makes me miss that time and place. I've missed you, D~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue... I have missed you also...the places are still there...seems they are just waiting for visitors. Thanks lady |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem arouses so many delightful and intriguing surrealistic mind images. Enjoyed! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
LHB..thank you amigo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! It's so good to read you again, dear D.! You are like a Pioneer in a Virgin Forest of Words and you share your discoveries with infinite charm. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar....thank you lady....good to see you touching here |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my, beautiful visuals Dark Stranger. Your words bring forth a lovely sense of adventure. Very nicely written, loved the flow.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I didn't realize how much I missed your poetry until I started reading it again. This is beyond superb. I love it. Yep, I do. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Kit....thank you for the read and comments.. ______________ Ms Ali-san thank you lady friend |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a treat it is to read your words again... and what a special feast the 3rd verse is! From title through last line... loved it! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern, you always smile me wickedly...thank you lady |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
as a jaguar of sighs, bending wills and the metal of muscle with desire teaching languages to the moaning men when they are helpless in her dungeon Whoa horsey...now u have reached me in more ways then one....she is the maiden ready for marriage? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It's a Picasso of words... abstract and intriguing, they pull one in and threaten to never let go Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The Jaguar is my favorite car. It must be an excellent tree. I had one parked in my driveway many suns ago. There are many ways to define the sexy slide of its shine it would seem. Enjoyed your words here today. |
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