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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-04-24 02:03 PM

On a newborn lawn
the first weeds of
Spring

Who but you
my Lady of Green
could wear these common
flowers, with such
majesty?

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (04-25-2013 07:48 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-04-24 02:16 PM

Ah, and who but you, Poet Supreme,
Can describe the wonders of Spring.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2013-04-24 02:26 PM

Why thank you Sir Jerry

glad you liked

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2013-04-24 02:38 PM

spring is here, there is no doubt, thanks for the marvellous write,
yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2013-04-25 04:30 AM

Lovely writing, EmmaRose. have become a fan of your work.
Ida

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2013-04-26 12:13 PM

I am in favor of dandelions. If they grew in a nice clump or row people would appreciate them.
loved your poem. jo perry

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2013-04-26 04:12 PM

love them! I taught my granddaughter how to blow them and she still loves to do it

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2013-04-27 02:45 AM

We still have masses of snow here, but I know those dandelions will be peeking out in a month or so to cheer us up!

A

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2013-04-28 01:59 AM

How could I have missed this little gem set in golden petals?

Owl

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2013-04-29 10:06 PM

Very nice! They've been in the air here for a month or two ... and the ragweed, and the tree pollen and the, the . . . AhChoo!!

But the grand kids, (and grandpa) love the dandelions ---

j.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2013-04-30 12:16 PM

Simply stated...and that shade of green looks good on you....your majesty of the short verse.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

11 posted 2013-04-30 10:09 AM

This is delightful EmmaRose! Such a wonderful visual captured within so few lines. Well done, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

12 posted 2013-05-02 04:31 PM

Very nice. Enjoyed!

sanctus
New Member

since 2013-05-02

Posts 6
Canada

13 posted 2013-05-02 04:40 PM

Beautiful poem! Great write!

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