Open Poetry #48 |
automatic wish washers |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I remember how you said you wished for more words that you could use as butterflies on your window just for me words you suggested playfully innocent and then you wrote some on my skin with saliva backwards in your most amazing penpersonship docking my sensitive parchment behind mirrors so only my eyes would know your language sound but then you traced them too with fingerings pressing the frets of my chords into anthems and gnawing upon my musical notes like candy bars that you just bit and broke off in mouthfuls but didn't swallow the sounds until they melted I remember how you said you wished for more words _________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
'what's in a name? that which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet;' oh I do love this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms N..well I call roses "watersucking plick parties" but that is probably way to romantic for your tender eye pockets...grins...thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I remember how you said you wished for more words that you could use as butterflies on your window just for me words you suggested playfully innocent and then you wrote some on my skin with saliva Softly sensual... and superb! *S* I love it!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern...thank you for the softshoeslipon glances lady friend. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
There are lines in this poem that I want to steal - but the poem would be less without them. It's beautiful in all its wording. ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san...go shead and steal away, they grow back. thanks ms |
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