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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2013-04-14 04:35 PM


I dream of sunsets along the desert mountains
around a summer breeze that floats the wind
to find a small vessel of humanity within myself
I dream of oceans that fall away in time
along a horizon once thought of as the end
transgressions cannot be given life

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-04-14 05:17 PM


quote:
transgressions cannot be given life

No, but we can allow transgressions to fester and ferment inside ourselves until it becomes us, and that is the sad part about it.

Good poetry. Gives the reader much to reflect on.

~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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2 posted 2013-04-15 03:55 PM


quote:
to find a small vessel of humanity within myself...



Thank goodness for the 'markers' along the way.  Enjoyed!  

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