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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Hush, turn down the volume of the world Tune into your broken heart, turn the dial Until you hear no more static, because that is where you will find me I've always been here for you to listen I never left you, but when your pain is overwhelming your heart overshadows my frequency Close your eyes and rest for you are safe within me When I cannot take away the anguish it breaks my heart, yet I wait until you can hear me again |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very befitting poetry . . . ~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-14-2013 06:43 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I appreciate your kind words. This was actually a poem I wrote for a friend. Her son passed away 4 years ago, and she feels far from God. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I would have never known it was a poem written about a child dying and you wrote it for the mother of the boy. It would help if you would have gave a short note above the poem something about why you wrote it. I felt like an idiot with my comments. I fixed my comments to reflect more truly the poem's reflection. ~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I am so very sorry. I did not mean to make you feel that way it was not my intention. I should have posted a little story about it. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
quote: That's a good friend! Enjoyed!  |
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