If I Placed a Sparrow... (Last Stanza)

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Open Poetry #48

If I Placed a Sparrow... (Last Stanza)

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2013-04-08 01:22 PM

If I Placed a Sparrow...

If I placed a sparrow onto yours,
my lover's heart,
would the nestling build a stable home
or fledglingly depart
reborn into your firmament
as an eagle stealth in flight
soaring steadfast in the atmosphere
a love of greatest height.

Sorry, Jerry, the girls won out! Kinda!

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (04-08-2013 06:02 PM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-04-08 04:12 PM

I see that the girls did, Bob, but it is the kinda that pleases moi. Nothing like the soaring to reach loves greatest and most satisfying heights.

~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-04-09 01:51 PM

Thanks Jerry...

Always, always my great pleasure to satisfy the miss Piggy in you! (moi)

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