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The Line |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I stood in line the line moved slowly then it stopped started again stopped why has the line formed I asked the woman in front of me "to connect with another line" she told me you're crazy, I said, I'm leaving she pointed to another line "in that case you have to get in that line" ©March 30, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Lol... Sounds like the CA Department of Motor Vehicles... only I'm not sure the lines even move in there. Thanks for the laugh. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lines . . . I learned to hate them when I went into the Air Force. Thanks, Michael. ~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A line to leave a line! Perfect! Enjoyed!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh Wouldn't surprise me if that doesn't come to pass, Bob, thanks for checking me out. ~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Yep, as annoying as being on the phone, 'press 1 for this, 2 for that, then you get to 1 or 2, and it's 'press 1 for this, 2 for that' Ugh..........part of Life unfortunately, guess we have no choice |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I guess you're right, Emma, but unless absolutely forced to I will NOT stand in line. Thanks for your input here, I appreciate it . . . ~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ironically I'm forming a line here. And at this point in time I'm at the end of it. Guess I don't have an issue with it. Thank God! I have enough issues about other things seemingly as insgnificant as standing in line. Loved this poem Jerry it had one of your classic "gottchas" at the ending. You still amaze me how you can take the mundane and make it entertaining at the very least lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lori, I think we are all in that line you speak of. You say you are at the end of your line, and I maintain, in that case, there is nowhere else to go but towards the starting of that line. Thanks for your interesting input. ~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~ |
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