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The Writer....for L.L.
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The Writer....for L.L. |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
The Writer Quietly she sat there wondering Thinking how her life had changed Knowing always the world is turning So nothing stays the same As he sat there writing, she watched him Saw his face,so in thought She so wondered what he was thinking The depths of him she sought Slowly he started typing Then she saw his excitement grow His fingers flowed 'cross the keyboard A sightshe'd never known His body contained the spirit This spirit, she saw it bloom She saw his soul flow outward Saw him blossom in the room All his thoughts, came through his fingers All his love came out in words Darkest thoughts and deepest secrets His true feelings contained in verse This is it, she sat there thinking This is why she loves him so All this passion deep inside him As he types, she sees it flow She too, knows of this passion Of the feelin from within Wanting always and so needing To write of love, and life and sin In her chest, her heart is racing In her eyes, she feels the tears At long last things come together Her soul mate, after all these years. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When you realize and understand what the makeup of your lover is all about is the time when your love for him intensifies ad grows. Nice poem, Sue. ~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
We should all be so lucky! I knew the taste of that connection once . . . now gone, but the taste lingers. |
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LorienLord Member
since 2013-02-03
Posts 55Wisconsin USA |
Obviously you know this is one of my favorites...and not just because it's about me. LL |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
quote: Now, that's a perfect ending! Enjoyed!  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
it takes time to write and feel the truth of it, i find your poem deep and enticing, thanks a lot yann |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
O, you will never have any idea how this makes me feel ... I best not type anymore today lest I accidently reveal ... O God ... you might be watching! quiet with Ginny |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
Glad you liked this poem. I remember the night I wrote it and how excited I was as I typed each word. Thanks. Sue |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So wonderful to see such passion flowing, even it is for someone other than ourselves. Thank you for sharing such an intimate moment. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This was absolutely precious, Sue. I don't need to tell you how lucky you are to experience this I'm sure... to be so comfortable with someone you can open upl, right there with them present, and give birth to the passions of your soul. Intimate. Indeed. Michael |
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