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Bluebird passing
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Bluebird passing |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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In the somber moment your sudden flight of color then quick departure unaware, you brought comfort to the sorrow behind the window view. [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (04-06-2013 11:05 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heartfelt condolences go out to you for the passing of your friend. ~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thank you kindly for that  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
By the way, I should have worded my comment a little better. I knew it wasn't a "real" passing, Emma. I meant it kinda tongue-in-cheek, but after rereading it it doesn't exactly comer off like that. ~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
It really is whatever you believe it to be I like to leave it up to the reader's interpretation |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Like your 'bluebird passing', I do think, perhaps, the things we do unaware hold the greatest reward when we get beyond this window. Enjoyed! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
sad and delicate, made me think of a song "everything must pass" thanks a lot fr sharing yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Emma, this is a masterpiece that, for me, stands out amongst all your other masterpieces - it is gossamer-thread exquisite! Thank you for painting your sorrow into such beauty and enriching me and all who read it. I know that it will have enriched you as well. It has put my life one notch higher, though I won't remember that every moment of every day for the rest of my life, but I will benefit from it. I am sure it will do the same for other readers too. Thank you. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thank you so much for your expressions of loveliness on my poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
The Bluebird is supose to bring happiness but I guess your sorrow is in it's leaving. Nicely done. Kat >^..^< |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
One of your best, EmmaRose. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thank you so much for your thoughts on my poetry, makes me happy to know you read me |
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