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Open Poetry #48

Surrendering

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2013-04-04 10:20 AM

So windy today
A white plastic bag, waving
from the tree branches

My heart carries hope - it is
not nature surrendering

***

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2013-04-04 08:10 PM

Hey, for me anyways, just to receive an unexpected "wave" at times can be hope enough and, also, so you know, you structured this one really well. Enjoyed!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2013-04-05 12:54 PM

A very thought provoking few words, Larry. Excellent.
Ida

Sue_s
Junior Member

since 2013-03-26

Posts 45

3 posted 2013-04-13 03:58 PM

Very cool piece. I'm sorry it took so long to respond. ....and me, I'm hoping nature IS surrendering...It would be nice to get some warmer weather here on the east coast.

Sue

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2013-04-14 01:08 AM

The winds this world throws at you these days can be unbearable it seems. Hope is priceless... and so nice to see shared. Enjoyed this.

Michael

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2013-04-15 01:46 AM

Hope... one of the most wonderful
words in our world.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

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