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LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
Posts 55
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-03-30 08:11 PM



Vampyre XV

You have opened your doors
and let me in
now there's nothing to stop me
and so I begin
slowly I kiss you
Then lay you down
as you slide under my body
you feel you will drown
you can't catch you're breath
as I take it away
you're body's an instrument
which my fingers now play
then I draw my bow
against your taut strings
make you scream out the music
as your heart sings
a crescendo of lust flows through your veins
and your once white sheets
are now covered with stains
made by the passion
of our duet
as the song comes to a climax
that you'll never forget
but as morning comes
the melody will fade
then I will become just a memory
of the music that we made.

V

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Sue_s
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since 2013-03-26
Posts 45

1 posted 2013-03-31 07:02 AM


Oh my..Is it hot in here or am I having a hot flash? It has been a while since I have read this. Positively breathtaking still. That "V" sure can write some awesome poetry.

  
love,
me

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2013-04-01 10:35 PM


Ooooooo Lala .....lala!



2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2013-04-02 12:50 PM


I love the atmosphere and the lovely music of the words, vampires are awsome in your poem, thanks


yann



Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2013-04-03 07:18 PM


Very Sensual and Passionate. Enjoyed!  
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