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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2013-03-28 04:39 PM






My mood is changing like the weather
My thoughts nothing but a whisper
I stare out my window
I am outside looking in
My dreams seem miles away

Yet, when I look into your eyes
You are my safe harbor
You pull me in
when you know that I'm miles away
trying to catch my dreams

And when I tell you that I'm lost
You smile and whisper in my ear,
"No you're not sweets, because you are right here with me and safe in my arms."



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-03-28 04:49 PM


So very nice to know you have someone in your corner. Touching poetry.

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Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2013-03-29 02:00 PM


I really enjoyed your musings and their coming back to center.  
Victoria
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3 posted 2013-03-29 06:56 PM


Lovely words...and nice to meet you.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
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4 posted 2013-03-30 03:44 PM


May I just say that I love this?

I love this.

Alison

Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2013-03-30 04:42 PM


Thank you guys.  It feels so great to be here to share my words with you. I've missed this place and it feels awesome to feel welcomed and that I belong somewhere.  
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6 posted 2013-04-01 11:09 PM


So much to like!!!

Gotta love it!   Lots!!!!

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