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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-03-25 02:53 PM

I felt the undeniable touch of your eyes
for the very first time and
the endearment of your arms,
but it was the sweet taste of your lips
that overpowered me
and the intoxicating
aroma of desire.

A whisper of a jasmine moon shining
upon the window of my soul
shining brightly;
as I surrendered
upon soft sheets of moonlight,
and a rosette of stars
spiraling out of control
shining upon mountains,
luscious peaks and valleys,
beneath the spell of a jasmine moon.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-03-25 03:30 PM

Such wordplay in this one, Victoria, and heading the list is . . .

quote:
luscious peaks and valleys,

That just says it all. You captured "the" moment perfectly. Very well written . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-03-25 04:13 PM

Thank you Jerry

...hope you had a nice weekend...always nice to hear your comments.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2013-03-25 07:48 PM

Your poetry stirs the imagination, the dream like state. Enjoyed.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-03-25 08:18 PM

Thank you Bob for peeking in tonight...
Always nice hearing from you.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

5 posted 2013-03-25 08:33 PM

This is really beautiful!
Love, like the scent of Jasmine, in the air. Well, love and snow - if you live in Pittsburgh...

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2013-03-25 11:07 PM

Oh oh oh.....so pretty V.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2013-03-26 09:16 AM

Thank you MorningStar...we in Virginia just had more snow yesterday...we have had more snow this spring than we had in the winter.

Lori...Thank you and Oh Oh Oh to you too ha..

~Victoria

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2013-03-28 09:57 PM

This is so intoxicating and beautiful.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2013-03-29 06:22 AM

Thank you very much...I am happy you enjoyed my words.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2013-03-30 03:50 PM

I can smell the Jasmine moon
and it smells as beautiful
as your poem.

Alison

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2013-03-30 10:36 PM

Thank you so much Alison...I appreciate your kind words...thank you for peeking in.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

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