Open Poetry #48 |
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avalanche of eventual |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
and then that avalanche of eventualities cascading down as windows with blinds hand drawn before my eyes in pencil thin no painted expressions or sculpted dreams no strings attached that might be tugged into moth wing sensation sounds around to capture a glance dancing too quiet as do tongueless shoes, without souls I tap a rhythm on tin women made of paper just to watch the ripples on their skin and imagine them as other kinds of eyes yes, a kinder kind of eyes glassing over then rolling upward into wanting, eventually ______________ daark |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This is really interesting, and has great depth I liked very much |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Cool poem, gentleman friend... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Olias, thank you guy. ____ Babyblue, thank you sexy eyes. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such incredibly enthralling and fascinating imagery! How nice to discover that you have visited the blue pages recently, Poet. Margherita |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love this poem so much that I saved it. No one plays with words as you do. So much here that I like, D. Ali-san |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Wow I forgot how much I love this site ... I really missed this place....need to quit leaving .... ![]() ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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