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The Lost Lenore New Member
since 2012-01-16
Posts 4 |
This poem was written for a fan fiction I am writing and a part of me is fine with it yet a bigger part of me isn't but um...enjoy? I tried to forget you but thoughts of you kept pulling me back You give me goosebumps everytime I think of you I try to stop but your eyes come to mind and they have captured my heart I hate that we will forever be apart. My thoughts are jumbles of the time we spent together But one recent one comes to mind The day I introduced you to Aella Your one kiss is why I am in this bind. You serenaded me with your sweet song You gave me that small but sweet kiss My heart was about to burst thinking that maybe we had a chance But then a realization made me remember this wasn’t a romance Thinking back to that fateful day There wasn’t a moment that past When I was locked up in my room Memories of you were the only things that would last I thought back to the events that happened prior then And hearing you say “it was just a one time thing” Caused me to have tears well up in my eyes once more Why did that kiss mean more to mean then that one time fling? I never was meant to fall for you I hated even wanting But your hand on mine, just one gentle touch Now means I hate myself so very very much I lead you to a place I had constructed It wasn’t much but it served the cause We entered there and to bed we went Between you and I you didn’t have any flaws I have tried and tried and tried again To lose what hold you have on me But for you to do what you have done You hold my heart, you have the key. But as I sit here with all this confusion Wondering why I should even care That one kiss, one very small kiss Will forever show me that you care. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
It was very moving, bittersweet and something wonderful. I enjoyed the write, had a few missed spelled words(unless intended) All in all it was great, nice write. Also WELCOME TO PIPTALK!!! Your'll have a lot of FUN!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Why did that kiss mean more to mean then that one time fling? I can relate to that...a bittersweet kiss that lingers forever. Enjoyed...and welcome to pip. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The poem reflects heartbreak and regret, coupled with illusions of magical love shattered. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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The Lost Lenore New Member
since 2012-01-16
Posts 4 |
Thank you guys. And this was posted with a cellphone which means the worlds worst addition to a cellphone decided to help me 'edit'...stupid auto correct. |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
... And what point is there to long For a friendship with her over the Internet When that will never be? Why am I not satisfyed with the memories and objects to keep her always with me? Because that is all that there will ever be. This poem comforts me a little. Because it tells me that you, like me, are longing for what will never be Even if the longing is pointless Because it isn't going to change anything. Thank you for that ever so brief connection with you. Jaime quiet with Ginny |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lost Lenore.... Welcome to Passions! I hope you find your time here to be pleasant and that we provide you with the input you need and ask for. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! "The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy |
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