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Open Poetry #48

"Cherry on Top?"

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2013-03-22 09:23 PM

"Cherry on Top?"
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............I
..........r
........e
......c
.......a
.........l
.............l......the sound
........of annoyance's scowl
......dripping from the gooey
...utensil filled with ice-cream
....sundae falling to the ground
....undone leaving teardrops on
......a mosaic concrete floor and
..........the nurturing absurdity
.............from a Tupperware
....................lid's burp.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-03-22 09:59 PM

I'm just loaded enough to say the I couldn't get past the first words of "I recall." After than I claim ignorance.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-03-22 10:12 PM

Hey, Jerry...

It's a cherry!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-03-22 10:25 PM

Jerry got the part that I didn't so he couldnt be too loaded because I'm sober as a judge ha...but the cherry idea is so cute...very creative Bob.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2013-03-22 10:44 PM

Yeah, Victoria...

me too... I was surprised that he got the hardest part. Kinda makes a person wanna get loaded to figure things out.

Anyways, thanks for the kind words.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2013-03-22 11:12 PM

Omg...this is too cute!!

I know I know, I could have had a v 8...

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2013-03-23 07:25 PM

Thanks Lori...

They have cherry flavor now! Really?

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