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She Lives |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
inside of me there is a hard ache as though it was a quarry stone it is buried deep the memory stone I cannot will not wage war to oust it and so it just reposes there and taunts me berates me for the dunce I was still am anyone who looks into my eyes cannot help but see happiness conjoined with pain my thoughts seen through my eyes tell a sad tale never mind glimpses of cheerfulness playing out like a dreadful story somehow she metamorphosed and attached herself to me it is real it is surreal I loved her I lost her she is here with me now and forever Nanette ~*~ Go to Heaven for the climate, Hell for the company. ~*~ [This message has been edited by paderewski (11-13-2013 07:33 AM).] |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
mixed emotions and torment amid the 'love' once known, great stuff ! |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thank you Emma. This poem has been on my mind for weeks, but couldn't put it together until this morning. ~*~ Go to Heaven for the climate, Hell for the company. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...James |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thank you James. ~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
detachment is always sufferings, when we lost someone, thanks for the very nice write, yann |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Appreciate the thoughts, Yann. ~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~ |
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