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Fireflies Dance |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Fireflies dance in cystal falls of lunar light flowing softly down the Blue Ridge mountains. When the moon is full and in its darkest hour the whip-poor-wills bathe in lunar fountains. In the mandarin orange light of dawn as the sun awakens the mourning doves, Wildflowers bloom near the serpentine streams and blossoming trees of purple foxglove. Fog of the mountaintops bloom like a rose as the birds and the flowers intermingle. Raindrops paint sculptured mountains blue brush painting ridges with periwinkle. Beneath canopies of hickory and oak trees exotic feathers and harmony in the leaves. Blue Ridge mountains a painting of appease in the tranquility of a moonlight eve. ~Victoria I was adored once too. William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-22-2013 10:35 AM).] |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Lovely read, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your words flow so beautifully...each verse compliments the next....like a ripple effect. Gorgeous poem, V~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
There is so much natural beauty described within the lines of this poem, Victoria, that is is breathtaking and so very, very lovely. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Kat...thank you for peeking in...apreciate your visits.  Lori...I'm so glad you enjoyed my blue mountain words today. hugss Jerry...thank you for your kind words as always...I'm happy you enjoyed. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah, it's me ... and you already know I really liked this! So . . . 'nuff said me thinks. j. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yeah I already knew you would like it ha. I know you don't like those mushy poems I write ha... Thanks Jimmy for peeking in.~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I like what you paint with moonlight. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Bob...what would we do without the moonlight... ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is an exquisitely crafted poem, dear Victoria. And the quoted line is a real top performance! Hope you are doing fine, it's a while that you do not visit. You are missed. Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You paint beautiful illustrations for the story that you share. Thank you. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely poem, Victoria. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
The kind of place dreams are made of |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Your word painting is beautiful, Victoria. Enjoyed! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you all so very much for your kind replys...Victoria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...this is going for a ride to the top...James |
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