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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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he stood in the depths of the swamp life had forsaken him, nothing to live for he felt a sloppy, wet kiss upon his mouth she sat in her room, hands clasp in her lap tears streaming down her face an unshaven kiss touched her lips he left the swamp smiling all the way on the porch she rocked and waited ©February 4, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ha! read the first Stanza and immediately thought it was going to be your dog! Even without the dog ... was good my friend. j. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Extrasensory kissing is definitely a monumental step up from tweeting on Twitter! Enjoyed the sentiment!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sweet story Jerry...I always enjoy your little tales around the swamp and New Orleans ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yeah, J, that wet sloppy kiss you would think dog. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, I always appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I belong to Twitter, but I don't like it so I never hard go there. Thank you for liking my poem, Bob. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Glad you liked my offering today, Victoria. Doing a little wistful thinking on my part here . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I often do that wistful thinking myself, Jerry  And as far as twitter, I don't even know what or how to use it...must be an age thing as I am slowly resenting newer technology. M |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Maureen, you said it for me when you said this . . . quote: Thanks ever so much for your input concerning my poem. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
And love prevails! Gotta love a happy ending "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hear you talking, MorningStar, and thank you for being in my space, I most appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You have the sweetest way with words and my imagination! lori |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I refuse to get caught up in the whole "twittery" thing... lost nothing there, and not going too. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks ever so much, Lori, I am happy that you liked my poetry. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Like I said, Jimmy, I have a twitter account, but never use it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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