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Tomer
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0 posted 2013-03-17 05:15 PM



She had a black shadow eyeliner
that ran off her green, forest eyes
blush padded on each cheek
with her lips like red bouquets
lining from one end to the other

Her toned, curved body
naked
as she put her black, calvin klein underwear on
slowly slid on her black leggings
then proceeded to the nearby walking closet
to see rows of dresses, shirts, and jeans
rhyming the room with their soft, pink wallpaper.

She put on a black, business suit
her skirt meeting her pale, soft kneecaps
with a black blazer brazenly pushed through
her thin, cotton right and left arms

five inch heels, check
her hair rested calmly past her shoulders
her eyes quickly shifted to the coffee machine
black, no sugar, no cream

just a routine she followed
business as usual
where her steel made kitchen
made even the harshest of winters
seem like a beautiful ride through white heaven

Like that,
she was gone,
like the sun that sets
over the oceans drifty stare
she was out the door
and back to dream, again
maybe this day will bring more.

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-03-17 06:17 PM


I enjoyed reading tomer...wishing I could wear five inch heels ha Never wore more then three and a half and now I'm lucky to wear two.

~Victoria

Tomer
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2 posted 2013-03-18 07:34 PM


Victoria-

Happy you enjoyed.  No worries, you can still dazzle even in 2 inch heels.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-03-20 11:51 PM


Love these thoughts...James
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2013-03-21 06:34 AM


loved the warm feelings I get when reading this~~

M

jwesley
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5 posted 2013-03-21 06:22 PM


Very, very nice, my friend.  


Tell V. I tried 3" heels ... when I was 6 ... wasn't the height that snookered me, but the lack of foot in front of the heel!!  Anyways, never tried them again...

again,,,, enjoyed this.

j.

Tomer
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6 posted 2013-03-21 07:46 PM


James-

Appreciate the love and happy you could see the vision.  Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
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7 posted 2013-03-21 07:46 PM


Naked-

Happy you enjoyed...hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
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8 posted 2013-03-21 07:47 PM


J-

Thanks for the love, my friend.  Hey, at least you tried them once...can't fault you for that.  

Cheers

Tomer

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