Open Poetry #48 |
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the long blue and red cargo boats |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The long blue cargo boats, the long red cargo boats, landed at night, kisses on quays, to me, I did not know how to keep you on board... It is necessary to make ten thousand journeys, to cross an amused girl, ten thousand blue cargo boats, ten thousand red cargo boats..... The immense cranes with their legs of birds, unload the blue sea cargo boats, unload cargo boats red with shame.... The long blue cargo boats, the long red cargo boats, made hundred times the world tour, and I was not able to stay at home..... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: La mer est l'épitome du désir et de la nostalgie ... Je suis en train de lire "Sept fois le tour du soleil" par Nicole Nealey-Van de Kerchove, mais là il s'agit d'un bateau ... mais la mer est "elle" toujours. ![]() So beautifully expressed, dear Yann! Margherita |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This will haunt me. Alison |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I crossed the sea from England when I was just seven months old to meet my father for the first time In America. I was his Christmas present. Thank you for posting yann. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very clever reference to the cranes, yann. Enjoyed. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite, dreamy, picturesque, memorable, so beautifully you, Yann. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
merci margherita pour le commenteire et la lecture, et aussi la référence à un livre que je ne connais pas , mais dont le titre m'attire beaucoup, bonne journée yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks alison, for very persuasive words, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello victoria, a very original anecdote that pleased me, we don't really know people, until they say you stories something like that, thanks a lot, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks ida, there is a simple explanation to that metaphor, in french this is the same word for a crane and a beautiful bird : we call them GRUE, thanks for commenting, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks diana for the kind and beautiful words, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks a lot, james yann |
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