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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us you seduce me with your despair the black clouds you carry within feeds my happy heart with power even as you descend into the tide you have given me my particulars when your anguish looks for hard handles to hang onto hasten your depths to which you will love me reaching for light shinning bright to lead you through muck & mire even as the deep lake engulfs you there is a light and it shines bright reach out your hands and grab me I'm here, we can fight this together let me soothe your furrowed brow reach out for me and I will be here I'm here for you no matter the cost ©February 11, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sounds like you are her anchor man, my friend. This is very loving. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori. Seems like we are the only ones stirring here today. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
maybe we are the only ones with a spoon  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heehee . . . You are sharp today. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
There's nothing in life as painful as having to watch someone you love suffer. Believe me, I know. I know you would probably trade places to take her suffering on yourself in a heartbeat... lifes to jaded to let us do that unfortunately. I hope she clasps your hand and finds it eases the burden somewhat even so. Michael. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
She is a lucky lady to have someone like you willing to be there thru the good and the bad. Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the kindness, Michael. <><> Thank you Kat. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
reach out for me and I will be here I'm here for you no matter the cost That's really all we can promise someone we love... we can't take away pain and suffering but we can be there, aching for them and holding on. This is very touching... wonderful write! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, suthern, I appreciate your kind, and wise words. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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