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I Cherish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I Cherish Stars sparkle in a heavenly meadow; wildflowers abloom in the night. While the moon is a bright lemon yellow, 'tis a moonflower shining bright. The cilantro scent of the prairie grass, and tangerine sunlight of dawn; Sienna embers of burning ash and the gracefulness of a fawn. A robins feather drifting in the breeze; thus bejewelled wings of butterflies. The moonlight sailing upon the blue seas while a white trumpeter swan cries. Each heartbeat is but a nightingale song, Cherishing little things as life goes on. ~Victoria~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah . . . THIS is just exquisite, Victoria . . . quote: Such a heartfelt, wonderful poem about nature and how it affects us who are inside its beauty. The closing line, "Cherishing little things as life goes on." was FAN-tas-tic! ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jerry, I'm so glad you enjoyed. It looks like Jimmy and I are in the same frame of mind today cherishing the little things. So nice to hear from you as always.  ~Victoria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So very beautiful....the simple things in life are indeed the most meaningful. Lovely, you... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Lori,yes as we grow older it is the little things that matter. Nice to hear from you as always. ~Victoria |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Delightful poem! This poem is a written painting. Man years ago I worked for city utilities often at night. Some of the most beautiful scenes I saw occured in the night. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Mr. B...so nice to hear from you again tonight...yes the sky is lovely at night when the moon is shining. I lived in ElPaso Tx before and the sky was so beautiful there...lavender and blue and pink. ~Victoria |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Victoria, your eyes and your heart have captured the very essence of beauty here. Excellent work! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
It's the little things that matter, and the little things that make the whole lovely Michael |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid, images i can relate too, so poetical and raising, great, yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful write! And like Jerry, loved the "The cilantro scent of the prairie grass". Lived in Southwestern Desert country for a number of years, and miss the smell of the prairies . . . j. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Michael, so nice to hear from you. I was born in Essex England. Thank you for your nice comments. Yann...always nice hearing from you and I am glad you enjoyed and can relate as I do. Jimmy...Thank you so much...always nice to hear from you and read your poems too. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Margherita...Thank you so much...and for your sweet comments...hope you had a nice time with grandsons and a wonderful birthday. hugss~Victoria |
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