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mvvenkataraman
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0 posted 2013-02-21 03:35 AM




War is a sure menace for tranquility
As it is a total calamity for humanity
War can be avoided via understanding
As resultant peace is fully outstanding

A woman bears the burden of birth
To bring a soul to this holy Earth
But, man takes few seconds to kill
And makes peace for all a big nil

Quoting Mother Country, all destroy
Maximum cruelty they badly deploy
Souls die due to merciless destruction
Devilish men are proud of their action

Men will never realize what is happiness
They will continue to be damn careless
By choosing only the wrong way to live
Men will punish fellow men, never forgive

God and Nature alone must teach a lesson
To tell men clearly that life has a reason
Without any such lesson from the Lord
Men will act in such a way to only retard.

mvvenkataraman


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2013-02-27 06:45 PM


Poet,

I must agree with your thoughts.

Thank you so very much for posting there here.


mvvenkataraman
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2 posted 2013-03-13 12:23 PM


Dear Blessing Angel,

You have given me courage
By augmenting my spirit
You have proved my worth
By very kindly patting
Thanks for this help
I will try my level best
To create meaningful poems.

mvvenkataraman

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