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VAS
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0 posted 2013-02-17 04:17 PM


http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap080215.html
Super Cat
soars through the universe
streams past comets, flies beyond moons.

Able to spring
from point to point
star to star, Jupiter to Neptune.

Zooming
through the heavens
with birds and mice on his mind.

No nebula
nor star field
will deter his destination.

He spirals past
Saturn and wrestles with Mars,
orbits our Earth and settles

Just outside the barn
hayloft calling, crawling
with morsels of delight, g'night.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2013 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2013-02-18 12:34 PM


outstanding, what a story af this cat, i love the imagination of it and delightful images,

have a good day


yann


VAS
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2 posted 2013-02-18 12:29 PM


Thanks, Yann, for your encouraging words and taking time to pop in and read my playful moments.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Victoria
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3 posted 2013-02-18 02:11 PM


A super cat indeed...good job Virginia as always.Those photos are amazing. hugss

~Victoria

VAS
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4 posted 2013-02-18 03:53 PM


Thanks, Victoria, and also for popping in.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2013-02-20 11:53 PM


enjoyed...James
VAS
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6 posted 2013-02-21 12:41 PM


Thanks, James, for popping in and your encouraging word.
Sunshine
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7 posted 2013-02-27 06:50 PM


My Virginia,

I so miss having cats...

and your poem brought back the perspective
of their peculiar pretentions....because after all is said and done...

they curl up next to or upon us, purring, perfectly happy to be content with the idea
of a human by their side.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
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8 posted 2013-02-27 07:21 PM


Yes, Sunshine, they certainly do, as long as it's on "their" terms.
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