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Remaking Me
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Remaking Me |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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They used to take me and bend me into most anything they wanted. They used to take me and try to break me then wonder why they couldn't. They used to sample what they thought I was about tried to reshape me into someone else. Sometimes I would let them because I had feelings for them but then I would walk away. I would leave them wondering where was that man who was mine and mine alone. Then, don't'ja know I found you love, sweet love, has bound me to you and I can't leave ©February 3, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes that happens Jerry. Nice when you find someone who likes you just the way you are. Enjoyed your wordsl  ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, it most certainly is, Victoria. Thank you for stopping by . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Very touching write, JP. Enjoyed... a lot, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Goo morning, Ms E. Appreciate the visit this a.m. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..bravo Jerry..! sz ~~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Spiros, I appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
if only to ignore the 'theys' right? life would be a breeze..................... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely, Emma, absolutely. Thank you for your presence here . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Delightful! Sounds like you have had a rich, and varied love life. Not so for me: We got married young and stayed that way. This occured because I never had the time or money to go to the bar and check out the available ladies. Before we were married I remember my wife saying we were 50/50. My wife doesn't remember that. She says it was more like 90/10. And I only get the ten on Sunday afternoons. So if I looked I would probably see a curly fry. But I don't want to look. Keep writing, food stuff is in you. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love and its aftermath is sometimes wishful thinking. Thank you for stopping by Duck. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks...James ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Exactly that. Some of us can only be pushed and prodded into forms that we do not fit into....and it will always depend on how much we love the prodder to get them to realize what, and will be done, with our own making. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, you're telling it like it is, Karilea, and thank you for doing that . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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