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Alison
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0 posted 2013-02-17 01:25 AM


laboriously, i push
through a fog of fatigue
not wanting the journey to end
for only pain and tears
await me

-

Alison

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2013-02-17 02:11 AM


Hugs!

Owl

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2013-02-17 03:14 AM


My soul aches for what awaits,
sending you prayers, love and light,
Godspeed.
E

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2013-02-17 03:15 AM


Thinking of you, I know what you are going though. I have been there. Peace and love to you and your Mom.
                         Ida

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-02-17 07:20 AM


Sad. Pushing to get to the end when you know the end will be even sadder.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-17-2013 08:31 AM).]

Victoria
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5 posted 2013-02-17 08:09 AM


Heartfelt indeed and my heart goes out to both of you.

~Victoria

jwesley
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6 posted 2013-02-17 08:38 AM


Alison ,

If my heart
could put its arms around you,
if it could hide you within,
protect you from outside itself,
if it could give you solace and peace
and warm you,
I'd gladly tear it from my breast
and give it to you.

Instead, all I can send
are words, all the warmth of my being,
heart-hugs, soul-kisses,
spirit arms, and the rest of me,
an effigy of love and caring and wishing.

I give you my entire life, my shoulder,
on which to lay your head,
and open my soul completely,
to yours.


Ever your Friend,

Jimmy

[This message has been edited by jwesley (02-17-2013 09:33 AM).]

2islander2
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7 posted 2013-02-18 12:41 PM


hi sweet alison, if i could ease your pain, i would immediatly take a plane , your delicate words share what you feel, and i wish you best changings,
thanks for sharing,


yann  

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8 posted 2013-02-18 02:09 PM


Cear Ali.
I want run beside you in spirit on the journey, because you are a unique incarnation and embodiment of Love!
I want to hold Love in my arms and embrace Love in my heart, so Love can run with me too.
Bless you!
Bless you!
Bless you!

Love,
Jaime

Alison
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9 posted 2013-02-19 02:01 AM


I was going to write a reply to each of you, but what I have to say, I can say to all.  PiP is filled with wonderful people - people who have grown to mean a great deal to me.  Each of you have touched my heart - and, Jimmy, your reply made me cry (in a good way - I needed to cry).  I get wrapped up in the things that keep me from writing and keep me from coming here ...  but when I do come here and reach out, I feel the love of the friends that I have met.  It's a wondrous thing.

Times are tough for my family right now - and it's good to come here and be among all of you.

Thank you.  With love,
Alison

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10 posted 2013-03-08 12:45 PM


You are love and love endures pain, while also alleviating it.

Intense verse, dear Alison!

You touch my heart. May you feel the presence of Angels helping you through ...


Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Alison
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11 posted 2013-03-08 01:50 PM


Dear Margherita, this inner strength is being fed by them. Love you.

Ali

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12 posted 2013-03-08 06:54 PM


too sad, well done
Alison
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13 posted 2013-03-08 08:03 PM


Thank you, Emma.

Alison

BluesSerenade
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14 posted 2013-03-09 07:32 PM


My heart weighs heavy reading your thoughts, Alison.
May God's will be done and grant you strength.

Saying a prayer for you good poetess.

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2013-03-10 07:15 PM


Nice...James
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