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Open Poetry #48

I Want

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-14 05:46 PM

I want to be kissed
the way the sunshine
kisses the waves of the ocean,
The way it kisses
the breast of a meadowlark;
I want to feel the sultry rains
of love ravishing my skin,
I want to feel like a brown-eyed
evening primrose being serenaded
by the stars.
I want to feel like a blossom
of a one night blooming cactus,
waiting to be touched by the moon,
If only for one night
to be touched by you.

~Victoria

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-14 06:08 PM

Okay. Whew! I got ya. Talk about the perfect Valentine Day poem. Whew! again. All kidding aside, Victoria, you put together some very sensuous lines in this "me" Valentine poetry. And there is not one thing wrong with being a little greedy, especially when it comes to those kind of kisses and touching . . . Nope, nothing wrong with that at all . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-14 07:06 PM

Well I wrote a Shakespearean poem for my husband but I wrote this one for me ha. but he gave me a Hallmark card. Cant get a Hallmark that says all this

Thanks Jerry I'm glad you enjoyed.

~Victoria

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-02-14 08:49 PM

Like eating a delicious meal...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-02-14 09:56 PM

Thank you James.and Happy Valentines day

~Victoria

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