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Open Poetry #48

A Valentine

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-14 12:32 PM

Why does the wind whisper your name?
in the shadows of yesterday;
ever so softly whispering,
reminding of a lost love.
When was it over?
Where did it go?
How did it get started?
I don't know;
Still, I carry your memory
like extra baggage;
lugging you from place to place.
as it lingers
upon a miscellaneous shelf
of lost but not found;
next to the Twinkies and other
memorabilia.

~Victoria

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-14 12:59 PM

I have that whispering of lost love, Victoria, and in my case her name was (she has passed on now) Nanette. She was the best thing I had ever had and the best thing I would ever have. I was much too stupid to understand it.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-14 01:08 PM

Too young to know better...and than its too late...well at least you have nice memories of her. Everyone can relate I'm sure.

~Victoria

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2013-02-14 01:59 PM

thanks victoria for the loving and precious words about love, life and memories teach us so many thing, thanks for the beautiful and sensitive penning,

yann

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-02-14 05:49 PM

Thank you yann. Im glad you enjoyed and thank you for reading

~Victoria

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