Open Poetry #48 |
I Could Say |
LorienLord Member
since 2013-02-03
Posts 55Wisconsin USA |
I could say I love your eyes so deep Pools of quicksand From which I cannot escape And slowly as I sink I realize I'm not afraid To drown in you. Or I could say I love your hair so soft A river of dark satin That flows like a torrent Down your pillow And across my chest Flooding the desert of my soul. Or I could say I love your lips so warm That speak the words I long to hear Falling on me like evening rain Washing away all my fears As every night you call me to your side Whispering promises of eternal love. Or I could say I love all the exquisiteness that is you As your soft and gentle curves Beckon my fingers to travel the paths Leading to the crossroads Of your heart. Or I could say I love you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love those first two verses and the whole poem. Welcome to the blue pages ~Victoria Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah . . . you could say all that . . . And you just did say it. ice writing. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And you have said it well...James |
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