Open Poetry #48 |
To Judy (because it still says it all ) |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
The Best of You The warmth of your hand in my pocket on whitened Winter days, The salt on your hair in the sunlight in seasprays Summer haze, The look in your eyes at the movies when Bogart wins Bacall, Your stockings draped over a door knob the ghost of your scent in the hall, How giddy you get at a party when champagne's bubbles flow free, In a room full of handsome strangers you only have eyes for me, When we dance in the night without music you bury your head in my chest, Then whisper so softly "I love you" my darling, thats the best. To my wife on valentines day, an oldie but a goodie.... A little like us. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have missed you, and your wife will like the fact that you remember, bless you, of a time when you wrote this, AND remembered that your wrote this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is delightful, specialy for valentine's day, a list poem which brings happiness to the lovers and readers , thanks for the very enjoyable read, yann |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Perfect Valentine, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed your words Olias, I liked the darling part ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes, the oldies are the very best goodies, OLIAS, and it sounds as if your oldies are very special. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thank you all for dropping by and taking the time to read and comment Judy and I appreciate it. We just had a prime rib valentines dinner and now we are off to bed. P.s. A special thanks to Sunshine it's been a while poet friend, I know you recently got real busy, congrats. I may hang around for a while, last time I said that was about 5 years ago ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely. I know your wife loves it. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Only way to feel, my friend... enjoyed this, thought not as much as she, I'm sure! Ah yes . . . to bed to let your stomach rest, huh? lol... j. |
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