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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Again dawn sun Light the first love Is pink and blue On hulls of clouds Just passing by Low hills And green trees Have just begun Coming into view Beyond the yellow fields Through an open window I can see a pair of sparrows Still nestled together Under wooden eaves Already bells are ringing The first mass Leaves rustle The air is cool All over town People are kneeling In the street . |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
As good a poem as I ever read! Keep writing. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You paint a beautiful picture with your words, John. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This IS beautiful, but it leaves me feeling a bit unsettled. I don't know why. Perhaps that is why I like it. Alison |
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