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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-02-08 07:54 AM



Words . . .
How could
I have
dedicated my life
to anything
so flimsy,
so flexible,
so absolutely ready to deceive?

©February 7, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2013-02-08 12:21 PM


I can't think of anything more interesting than to be a writer. We don't need other people to amuse us as long as we have a pen and piece of paper...thats all we need.
and maybe some food once in a while ha.

~Victoria

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-02-08 01:28 PM


I couldn't agree more, Victoria, even when I'm complaining it's fun. Thank you for your comments.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

OLIAS
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3 posted 2013-02-08 03:38 PM


Your words are very true

We mine papers, white,
Digging with pens to reveal,
The gems that are there,

Very much enjoyed.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-02-08 03:41 PM


. . . and I thank you, OLIAS, for you taking the time to read and comment on my little poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2013-02-08 04:48 PM


VERY succinctly and well said, Jerry !

To me ... 'words' are the only lasting source of
true 'magic' in this lovely but oft' sad 'ol world!

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-02-08 04:59 PM


Thank you very much, Bruce, I agree with you that words can be magical, and on the other had cause sadness and pain.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-02-09 08:46 PM


Words can be creative and instructive as well as mean and destructive...an extension of the thoughts blending within...James
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2013-02-09 08:52 PM


Oh, I know you are right, James, and I thank you for taking the time to read my little ditty and comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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