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Open Poetry #48

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LorienLord
Member

since 2013-02-03

Posts 55
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-02-06 06:55 PM

Too many years
have I thrown myself
against your window pain.

But the glass is too strong
you will never get out
and I will never get in.

KJOTT
Member

since 2012-12-26

Posts 87
Canada

1 posted 2013-02-06 07:15 PM

If you can't get through you can often get around instead!
Nice and poignant.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2013-02-06 07:53 PM

I liked this very much.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-02-06 09:46 PM

Excellent poetry! Welcome to The Blue Room . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2013-02-07 10:16 PM

Welcome to Passions, Lorien.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-02-09 09:03 PM

Nice...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2013-02-10 04:59 AM

Welcome, Lorien. Love poem.
Ida

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