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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-05 12:58 PM

My eyes dancing within the stage of yours,
the midnight stage as you lead the way.
Two Passion flowers tangoing within
the heady breeze of the wind,
and the sweet fragrance of once was
flirting within the lilac rain
and the aroma of lips scarlet red,
drifts within grains of golden sand,
within the waves of moonlight tides,
drifting to the destiny of your lips,
are soft whispers of (forget-me-not)
while loving seeds of yesterday
bloom in the garden of your mind,
still tasting the blossom of my lips.

~Victoria~

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-06-2013 08:21 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-05 01:42 PM

The heady fragrance of your sweet lips will forever haunt him as he walks away, lonely and destined to remain that way.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-05 02:14 PM

I hope not Jerry...but thanks for reading and hope you have a great day and
forget-me-not

~Victoria

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-02-05 02:40 PM

Ah . . . I must have read that wrong, sorry, Victoria.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-02-06 09:46 AM

Simply exquisite, dear Victoria!

Margherita

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2013-02-06 10:21 AM

Thank you Margherita...I did do editing on this one as I always do after posting. Nice to hear from you as always dear lady.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

6 posted 2013-02-06 08:04 PM

Cool word pictures, written with style I liked.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2013-02-06 09:04 PM

Thank you so much Olias...Nice of you to peek in tonight.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2013-02-09 09:09 PM

Nice visual romantic writing...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2013-02-09 09:21 PM

Thank you for peeking in tonight James.

Victoria

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