Open Poetry #48 |
Her private patio |
Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
It was a fall evening but there was a soft reminder of a conversation that trailed the fields of leaves that night Its a small place private with its own patio another balcony that fell on the westside region of her hands Her neck slightly undressed the evening star sat next to the sky like the kite ridders that filled the august air As she felt the song of her mothers voice against the back of her throat like a quilts quiet note against the backdrop of a winter fall Just enough strength down and through the winds tunnel that sets its eyes on the train tracks leading towards her own private road. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
As she felt the song of her mothers voice against the back of her throat These lines conjure a wonderful image and sensation in my mind. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
VAS- Happy you enjoyed that mini stanza. Hope you're well. Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
James, Thanks, buddy. Hope you're well. Cheers Tomer |
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