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Open Poetry #48

Awesome Inspiration can be found here.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2013-02-01 10:06 AM

http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap090125.html
Can you place yourself in front of this scene? Perhaps with a loved one or valued friend...

silhouette of fronds
illumined at their height
in stillness haloed

I have to say, I had extreme difficulty with that last line.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2013-02-01 12:37 PM

To whispering winds
the sun tangos with the moon
a fan dance of love

I liked yours Virginia and again thanks for another inspiring challenge.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-02-01 02:25 PM

Yes, awesome indeed, dear Virginia. I love your interpretation, it's very beautiful.

Very much enjoyed also Victoria's offering.

I am closing my eyes now to write down my own emotions:

Sun embraces moon:

Earth shudders missing a beat

hearts yearn for love touch

Hugs.
Margherita

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-02-01 03:01 PM

I loved both yours and Margheritas and I had to look up fronds Virginia...and thank you Margherita for your comments about my haiku too.

Victoria

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-01-2013 05:37 PM).]

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