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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2013-01-31 04:26 PM



A poet friend of mine, Bob Gaut, sent one of his poems. It's titled "Rumor Spreader." The moment I saw the title my mind started going on my fertilizer spreader.

So here's my try:

I have a fertilizer spreader
hanging round the garage wall.
I used to use it in the spring,
now I rarely use it at all.

I learned from a savvy
agronomist, the time to hit the lawn
is when the cool growing blades
are reaching for the dawn.

Late in November  
in this northern hemisphere
is the time to spread manure
'tis the optimum time of year.

So if you spread manure
make sure it's the good blades that you feed
If you spread it in the springtime
you're nurturing the weeds.

Fertilizer spreaders help things grow
to unpredictable size,
so spread your fertilizer
on good grass not else wise.


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-01-31 08:20 PM


If you can write about manure you can write anything Virginia... Good job.

~Victoria

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2013-01-31 09:04 PM


Hey, Victoria, thanks for the Hardy laugh!

Well the comparative in my mind is that all too often the rumors that are spread are much akin to manure and they fertilize and grow to an unpredictable size.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2013-01-31 11:25 PM


How true how true how true 'tis is!

Your imagination took rampant
spring's emergerations!

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